I have no idea what to write in my blog. I am thinking to use this blog as a place to get ideas and comments on some new songs I am writing, at least at first. Maybe once I get more into the habit of posting then I will have more ideas as to what to post.

This song is one I wrote as I was out walking at 530 in the morning watching the sun come up. The music I hear in my head is mostly country-ish... maybe a little bluegrassy.... It is a gospel/praise song. I am looking for detailed constructive critism. I would like for you to tell me what about the song you like, what you dont like, and feel free to suggest specific changes. If I like your ideas and make your changes I will credit you properly!!!
(lines with a * are ones I think need help)

Thanks in advance!!!

As I walk here each morning
written by Jenn F.



As I walk here each morning
And see the dew on the grass
I am filled with amazement and awe
The wondrous beauty
The glorious palette
This magical gift You gave me

Refrain

As I walk here each morning
And see the sun rising high
I can hear all of life sing Your song
The marvelous music
The incredible chorus
This magical gift You gave me

Refrain

As I walk here each morning
*We all sing Your praises
All the birds and the cattle and me
Some people don’t know it
Some people can’t see it
This magical gift You gave me

Refrain

As I walk here each morning
And the fog fills the valley
* The way the sun sparkles and shines
Let all people know it
Let all people see it
This magical gift You gave me

Refrain
I can walk, I can run, and I can surely dance
I can whisper, I can talk, and I can always sing
First You came, then You died, and You rose again.
Thank You
This magical gift was You